Since I started writing again after a 20 year hiatus I’ve put together a few stories that are ready to go out. This may be one of them after a bit more work. I want to know what others think. My fear is being a Pacione, Philbin or Dagstine and not know it. If you’d read the following story and let me know your thoughts good or otherwise I’d appreciate it quite a bit.
On the advice of someone I took the story down in case I decide to market it. I was referred to a critque group for some answers.